When you create something, it’s personal. For some people it’s hard to hear
what’s wrong with it or what could be done differently to improve it. After
all, art and style are subjective and it’s understandable to want to defend
your style, because in a sense it’s a part of you. However, if you want to improve, its best to
open your ears and listen to what the world saying.
There is no getting around the fact that we each see the
world differently, embrace the value of the wide spectrum and you’ll have a
better understanding of yourself, your work, and the world around you.
I submitted my drawing of Vikky to the sycra art forms for critique,
here’s what Sycra himself had to say:
"Hey Adam. Awesome work. There is a LOT of things that are awesome about this
image. I like the layout, the strong graphic sense, the color palette of the
background... Just some really top notch stuff. There are some areas that need
some work however. Storyben covered the collarbone, which I agree with, but
there are some other small areas, the cleavage in the breasts for example, that
could be improved. I think if you just spent a bit more time refining things
and studying some more reference it'd help. Also, I notice that there is a
change in color between the chest and face and the abs and arms and legs...
Even though you do get color shifts in pictures like this, I think for the
clean style you're going for, it may be better to stay to a similar color for
all these areas. The eyes are popping a bit too much. The value of white in
them might be a bit too strong and the color too... But it's not so garish to
me that you can't get away with it. I think it's your choice in this area. I
would personally make it a bit more subtle, but it's your call. Overall, really
nice work!"
-Sycra
Another user went ahead and did some edits to my drawing and
I have to say, I’m really glad he did.
It helped me to see a different version of what I am aiming for. I’ll probably
use his suggestions in the development of the character, as I sculpt it in
zbrush.
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Edits in tone and slight facial changes. |
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My original image. |